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Unread post #1 by DJ Lopsidedfro » Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:20 am

if you lame fucks want to run some online amazing stuff at me that's fine...but why come to a rap battle page if all your gonna do is post pictures and ask me how I'm doing...how the heck you think I'm doin? and I've been writing for 20 years,I have proper grammer when I write..this is battling,I write how I spit...now, that being said..
you bitches glued to the YouTube and them iPhones like like an iphool,keep getting me grammar Nazi and ill take you to Jew school,ovens and gas bitch welcome to class.think youre anonymous like we don't your sassafrass? well get blocked cause your spam sucks and you can't bust like my big nuts.so dig dust and jump in cause we don't fuss we just wrap it up like Guillermo.and when we leave please note the shells on the floor like o henrys,like a simile or epiphany, get it in your head we leave no enemies just a pile of your bloody bills cause nigga please...I'm paid
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Unread post #2 by arnie532 » Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:04 pm

DJ Lopsidedfro wrote:if you lame fucks want to run some online amazing stuff at me that's fine...but why come to a rap battle page if all your gonna do is post pictures and ask me how I'm doing...how the heck you think I'm doin? and I've been writing for 20 years,I have proper grammer when I write..this is battling,I write how I spit...now, that being said..
you bitches glued to the YouTube and them iPhones like like an iphool,keep getting me grammar Nazi and ill take you to Jew school,ovens and gas bitch welcome to class.think youre anonymous like we don't your sassafrass? well get blocked cause your spam sucks and you can't bust like my big nuts.so dig dust and jump in cause we don't fuss we just wrap it up like Guillermo.and when we leave please note the shells on the floor like o henrys,like a simile or epiphany, get it in your head we leave no enemies just a pile of your bloody bills cause nigga please...I'm paid
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Nonsensical. It's not that I'm trying to be a grammar nazi as you guys would say. I'm just pointing out that with it being ungrammatical and full of nonsense not many people can understand it.
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Unread post #3 by DJ Lopsidedfro » Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:37 am

ungrammatical? really? it's gramatticaly incorrect?

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Unread post #4 by Kaos » Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:22 am

Lets not be mean to each other, now.
Arnie, if you're confused with the line structure of the spit above, it can be approximately reconstructed as such;
if you lame fucks want to run some online amazing stuff at me that's fine...
but why come to a rap battle page if all your gonna do is post pictures and ask me how I'm doing...
how the heck you think I'm doin? and I've been writing for 20 years,I have proper grammer when I write..
this is battling,I write how I spit...now, that being said..
you bitches glued to the YouTube and them iPhones like like an iphool,
keep getting me grammar Nazi and ill take you to Jew school,
ovens and gas bitch welcome to class.
think youre anonymous like we don't your sassafrass?
well get blocked cause your spam sucks and you can't bust like my big nuts.
so dig dust and jump in cause we don't fuss we just wrap it up like Guillermo.
and when we leave please note the shells on the floor like o henrys,like a simile or epiphany,
get it in your head we leave no enemies
just a pile of your bloody bills cause nigga please...I'm paid
l.frizzle,

Rap is also not the best place to search for grammar, too. They have this whole unconnected simile thing which doesn't make any grammatical sense, but is used.
I think at this point we should just drop the issue, since clearly one or both parties will simply get upset about this.

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Unread post #5 by Phoenix^^ » Tue Mar 01, 2011 11:40 am

ok everyone calm down :lol:

Or i call the mod SWAT :twisted:

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Unread post #6 by Davo » Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:25 pm

rap battles usually make people upset, just talk stuff and carry on, wait for your response.

you guys are almost there, but you arent rapping.

rap, or get the heck off of this thread lol. have some fun and relax, noones getting banned!
me and fro do this in real life, so enjoy.

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Unread post #7 by arnie532 » Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:00 pm

DJ Lopsidedfro wrote:ungrammatical? really? it's gramatticaly incorrect?


Yes, I understand that there is generally no grammar in rap but some of this just wasn't understandable, I'm not here to be mean I just want to get the point across that some of it made not the greatest amount of sense Leaves thread

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Unread post #8 by Phoenix^^ » Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:01 pm

I dont think he realy upset anyone other than our great grammer nazi :mrgreen:

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Unread post #9 by arnie532 » Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:05 pm

Phoenix^^ wrote:I dont think he realy upset anyone other than our great grammer nazi :mrgreen:


Be careful with the names you throw around. Once again if you didn't read my post, I wasn't upset I was merely telling him the some of his things were not understandable. I think the fault might be on your part for thinking I was overreacting which I wasn't.
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Unread post #10 by Davo » Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:19 pm

it will all be ok, do you two have a problem with each other? remember guys, its just a forum.
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Unread post #11 by arnie532 » Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:21 pm

Davo wrote:it will all be ok, do you two have a problem with each other? remember guys, its just a forum.


No, I just told him once and he failed to listen.
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Unread post #12 by Phoenix^^ » Wed Mar 02, 2011 11:53 am

Arnie i do think your taking the lolzyness that is the inter webs to seriously come on lighten up :D

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Unread post #13 by arnie532 » Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:35 pm

Phoenix^^ wrote:Arnie i do think your taking the lolzyness that is the inter webs to seriously come on lighten up :D


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Unread post #14 by Kaos » Wed Mar 02, 2011 7:51 pm

He's just goofing around.


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