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1st Poem

Unread post #1 by BirdmanL88 » Tue Jun 22, 2010 3:42 pm

huh... no1 posts in here.... I guess ill be the first. Well here is the first out of many of my poems

As I travel through the gates of Hell
I bid my family all a farewell.
Many great stories I shall tell
of slaying the demons hiding in Hell.

This time I know I may not return,
I might be trapped forever or my soul might burn,
but the slaying of demons is what I yearn.
Many have tried, now its my turn.

My blades slash and my blades heck.
I snap a neck then break a back.
these demons come but still I attack.
Then all of a sudden I hear a grate crack!

It was Satan himself, what a great show!
As he appeared he let out a great bellow.
His demons appeared in greens, reds, and yellow.
All I had left was my bow and an arrow.

I shouted this, "Satan shall die!"
ad with that let my arrow fly.
It flew at him and passed through his eye,
that is when I saw the devil cry.

Now you know the story I tell,
of how I fought the demons in Hell.
The story is over now so go ring the bell.
The bell that summons the creatures hiding Hell.

No1 is gunna read this I bet... oh well



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Re: 1st Poem

Unread post #2 by Davo » Tue Jun 22, 2010 7:07 pm

i read it to the beat of the fresh prince...lol. good stuff man. thanks for breaking the ice around here. if you have any ideas on how to improve my community, please let me know!
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Re: 1st Poem

Unread post #3 by BirdmanL88 » Wed Jun 23, 2010 5:47 am

Id just say we need more members and that would help crap tons

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Re: 1st Poem

Unread post #4 by superckool » Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:01 pm

Great poem, I like it its actiony and surprising to.
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